A lil help with an essay please (:?

This sounds like a grade 11 or 12 English cl.. Sooo. First of all. Your thesis has to be more specific. pick 1 theme and stick with it. 2nd i'm guessing it's a FORMAL MLA format Essay so you can't speak in first person. so no contractions or "I" or "we" Do not state opinions. Only facts that are arguable and can be backed up. a better route to take is use the protagonists point of view. so and so experienced great sadness and this is present through the course of the novel bla bla. gives speccific boox examples and each bvody paragraph should be talking about a different example and reason why